This is the full length rough cut of my film. Since completing this version I have found a number of areas that I can improve as I showed it to my class. The main feedback was that the middle section in the forest went on for far too long without anything happening which made it really uninteresting. I am going to take out a lot of the shots that I used in this sequence to keep the film moving quickly. I also still need to add all of the music and sound effects to the forest sequence which will increase the tension and will make it generally more gripping. Apart from this there are just a few shots which need trimming slightly to get the best effect possible.
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